Lagarder7

Hello there,

What you can do is choose a more colorful theme, the design now looks too “clean” in my opinion.

As for the writing of the posts – my advise is to write about something which you are passionate about. Think about what is important for you and write about it.

That is the beauty of the WordPress blog – it is like having your own newspaper – a great way to share your opinion with the world and let your voice be heard.

Nope that feedback is helpful for you even tough it was a bit vague.

Regards,
Dimitar

Hello there,

Sadly there are many websites that advertize coupon deals, so it will be really hard to get into that marker. My best advise would be to add as many discounts as possible.

But again – there are many similar websites out there.

Regards,
Dimitar

Hello there,

What I will personally recommend is that you create a better design for your header image:

https://gute-e-zigarette-kaufen.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/09/cropped-E-Zigarette.png

This is one of the first things that your user see after all. At the moment the two women that you have put there are not very well-drawn to say the least.

Regards,
Dimitar

Hello there,

Overall the website design looks very good, just a couple of improvement that I think you could make:

1. The reset password page does not seem to work, or at least it does not “catch” if the e-mail address which you enter is already registered or not. I’m referring to this page:

https://www.launchfocus.com/reset-password/

For example if you enter [email protected] as the e-mail address and click on the “Submit” button the page is simply refreshed, but nothing happens, it should give an error message that no such e-mail was found in the user database.

2. On this page:

https://www.launchfocus.com/#bottom

It would be better if the links are working if you click on the icons as well, not only on the text. For example say with the last one that say “Other” – it would be logical to make the phone icon clickable as well, the same goes for all the other sections.

3. The icon space on the member’s page can be optimized better. I’m referring to this page here:

https://www.launchfocus.com/members/

At the moment on the first page you can see only 5 users, but all the space to the right of them is empty as well – that can be optimized to show at least 25 user on each page (presuming that you have 5 lines of users with 5 users listed on each line).

Regards,
Dimitar

Hello Jack,

Indeed your website is loading somewhat slow, however fixing that would not happen with a magical stick so to speak.

One thing that you can do is contact your hosting provide so that you can enable a caching solution for your website or if needed upgrade to a higher hosting plan.

What you can also so is check the following websites as they not only measure the loading speed of your website, but also provide you with hints and tips on what you need to optimize:

https://developers.google.com/speed/pagespeed/insights/?url=vitalmastering.com
https://tools.pingdom.com/fpt/#!/bvoHDn/vitalmastering.com
https://gtmetrix.com/reports/vitalmastering.com/Cz1Wtrhh

Best regards,
Dimitar

Hello there,

Honestly I really like what you have done with the website, looks very good. Two small things you can improve:

1. You can create your own favicon image for the site, at the moment all of your pages are using the default one which BlueHost gave you. There are many websites that can be used to easily create a favicon image for your website, for example this one:

https://www.favicon.cc/

2. I personally would spell “SALE” in the menu with one capital latter only, meaning like that:

“Sale”

Since all the rest of the options in the top menu are spelling with that format.

Hope that help, I wish you lots of success with the website.

Regards,
Dimitar

Hello,

Seems like your website is not working at the moment so I don’t think that your questions is relevant.

Regards,
Dimitar

Hello there,

Here are my thoughts on your website’s design:

1. It think you went too heavy with the blue color in it, if you want the main part and the background color to be in blue color what I will personally is go with a lighter blue.

2. On your contact me page:

https://www.jermainepleas.com/contact-me/

You should not directly give your e-mail address – there are bots crawling the pages for e-mail addresses to include in spam lists. Instead it would be much better if you use a contact form.

3. On this page:

https://www.jermainepleas.com/mca-career/

Again your e-mail address is seen, also the image below this part:

“welcome to the team.”

Is not loading, I get the following error:

“www.tvcmatrix.com –

Access Denied
Error code 16

This request was blocked by the security rules”

I hope you find this review useful.

Regards,
Dimitar

Hello John,

Overall the website looks good and very informative. Still there are two things that I noticed right away:

1. You went a little too heavy with the good adds part. Yes, a lot of people seem to think that this is a good way to make profit, but when you go too heavy with the adds it starts to get a little annoying.

2. Some of the pictures are missing or seem broken, for example on this page:

https://www.firstaidforfree.com/category/first-aid-blog/

This is the image to which I’m referring to:

https://www.firstaidforfree.com/wp-content/themes/hueman/img/thumb-medium.png

Hope that helps.

Best regards,
Dimitar

Hello Jamie,

I like what you have done with your website – nice job there. In regards to the design – I can not really comment on that since this depends on the taste of the user/designed. But I did manage to find a 404 page in your website – when you go to the “Contact us” page, then click on the text/link:

“contact us directly here.”

It goes here:

https://www.teachingtravel.com/contact/

Which page shows the following error on my end:

“404
Page not found
Oops! The page you were looking for was not found. Perhaps searching can help.”

Another thing that you can do is add more videos in the “Videos” section as at the moment you have only one.

Hope that helps,

Kind regards,
Dimitar

You are most welcome. I see that you have now started to add the pictures to the post, however one more suggestion in regards to that – embed them in the text. Meaning don’t have test-picture-text-picture-test.

Meaning for the alignment of the pictures use “left” or “right” instead of “center” or “none”.

In terms of code this means the following:

<img class=”alignleft>

Hope that helps as well.

Hello John,

It seems like you do have nice content and a simple design. What I would personally recommend is the following:

1. You should use more pictures in your posts. At the moment it is only text, which make the posts less attractive.

2. I would also recommend that you change your template with something a little bit more colorful. At the moment there isn’t something catching the eye so to speak and most of the people would get bored if they simply read tons of text over the internet.

Hope that helps,

Kind regards

Most welcome. To check the grammar you can use free online tools or simply office + turned on spell checker.

Good luck with your website!

Hello,

Overall the website is good looking and interesting, but I have a couple of suggestion:

1. The combination of colors in the header can be a lot better. I’m referring to this image:

https://www.blindstreet.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/07/cropped-Blindstreetheader2.jpg

I think that if you simply change the yellow color with white or black – that would look a lot better.

2. Issue with article CSS – for example here:

https://www.blindstreet.com/sarah-joyce-ocampo-singing-ayoko-na-original-composition/

You have a picture, then a video, but the video is overlapping parts of the text. You can check the other articles for similar issues as well.

Hello Vikas Yadav,

This site has an unfinished look like it is still in development. Nothing is “catching the eye” so to speak. Sadly I would have to say that you have a long way to go – adding a background image would help, changing your template would help as well, but overall at the moment you simply have a plain WordPress installation and some articles.