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  • Like I said, I am no copy writer just an English speaking person, but what did you think of the quick re-write I drafted https://imgur.com/PIHfUlU

    Thread Starter abdgd

    (@abdgd)

    It is really nice, do you give me permissions to use the text? I will hire a copy writer in the next 3 weeks.

    Thank you pedro for the hard job ??

    You are welcome adbgb. As I said, I just had a quick look at it and corrected a few of the grammatical inconsistencies. See how you go with the copy writer or whoever you decide to get, but if that does not work out contact me through this post and I will see how I go with tidying up all the English text on your site. And yes you have my permission to use the modified text that I drafted if you like, Pedro.

    I just had a look and saw that you had put my modified text up on your site Look I am sorry but there is a mis-spelled word “serivices” on the third line, first word on the left. Sorry about that I should have taken more care, Pedro

    Thread Starter abdgd

    (@abdgd)

    No problem mate, thank you so much the business is getting better for everyday.

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