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  • Edie

    (@pinsandfeathers)

    the background and layout is very nice, it looks very professional. the one thing i would change the font and the actual text formatting to make it look a little more aesthetically appealing.

    thanks! could you do the same for me?

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    Thread Starter Topol1

    (@topol1)

    Nice blog: very good heading and font style… BUT – left and right sides look separate, photos are really nice I like them ??

    You have got no introduction

    I agree, no intro of what you are; other then I suppose you are a gallstone diet expert? It does not feel like one is starting at the beginning although one might be.
    Mission statement?
    Who you are?
    What you are there for?
    etc…. My opinion.

    The personal blog style theme may not be the best selection considering the topic of the website. You might want to look for a more professional, standard looking theme that suits the website topic a bit better.

    Try adding some pictures instead of using words. A picture can tell a thousand words and it gives the impression that you know your stuff well and also you are wordpress savvy too. ??

    It is a good health blog you have made, i see that you have added some valuable content too. Anyway, here are a few tips:

    1) Get a logo, it will help improve your brand and increase your repeat visitors.

    2) Try to write longer articles, it helps to improve your search rankings. But showing the full article on the homepage might not be a good idea, specially if the article is long… it will affect your page loading time. Use the – “read more” tags for that.

    3) Use feedburner for your feeds.

    4) Use social media, twitter and facebook are the most important, but don’t let that limit you. Try to increase your influence on the social web, as much as you can.

    Over all your blog is good, keep it updated,
    cheers,

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