I'm A Newbie, Please Critique My Site

You have some layout problems — content overflows sections, page is too wide, large blank spaces, content not aligned correctly.

Fixing those would be a good place to start.

Too many ads in my opinion…

I’m with what WPyogi said. You have to put the ads where they will look like a part of your webpage. Don’t just place ads in everywhere you like, put them where they will blend and do some work around on those huge spaces.

I am also a Newbie and could use some tips on what I should add to my site to make it not look so plain. I think it looks plain. Your tips will be very much appreciated. ??

oops forgot to add my site lol…. here it is—-> [link removed – please post your own topic asking for a review]

It is good to improve your theme.