Critique my site please

I love handmade, too! ?? I need some color, though! Your site seems so sad with just the black and white.

It’s a good start but I think this is way too wordy:

I would cut it down and add images of what you sell as opposed to a long paragraph.

ok heres the thing, im using wordpress robot, my issue is i am trying to do a different page for each subject not a cluster f*ck and having apple with automotive and house stuff all on one page i think looks like crap
im still learning wordpress plus wordpress robot

I like it…how did you do the guestbook page?
Other question: how do you do in WordPress an external link page (like Facebook page on your site)?

lol i didnt know i had a guest book page

Zimbrul,
I created my WordPress blog thru my webhost ShoppePro, rather than creating one directly in WordPress. The guestbook page is part of the template that came with it. So I am not sure if creating external links is also different when you go directly thru WordPress.

pspuria81, I think zimbrul was talking to me about the guestbook page. You kind of posted this randomly and did not reply to my post.

sorry

Very nice, both your website and blog. Nice layout, easy to get around in and the choice of black and white is perfect. Good job.

Good Job

thank you marjiec and jaumesala

ok anyone that is willing to give me some tips on what i can do to make it more attractive please let me know

https://www.theinformativemonkeysblog.tk

and if you do compliment please make sure u direct it to me so i know and not make any mistakes

Thank You