Your opinions please

Good work, but is it a bit crowded ?

Hi. I agree that the layout is a bit crowded, and I think it hurts the readability that you can see the diagonal lines behind the text, especially in the sidebar areas where they’re more visible.

Crowded: true. Hopefully some whitespace and linespacing adjustments can fix that.

I really wanted to use the transparency of PNGs as a main feature of the design, and I won’t fake it, so I may have to try simply making the layers less transparent.

Thanks for your comments, any more?

the background dosent work for me, it looked confusing right away. maybe if all text were in tablets with white background!

Too much verbosity and not enough whitespace for me too. I also prefer the way it looks when you switch images off – that background is kinda distracting.

I agree with the general consensus.. it’s a bit too crowded, and much more whitespace is desired.

Good luck!

a bit crowded~~