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  • The site looks good, but it looks a little dark for the type of website you are creating there.

    I think your about page needs to be a little bit more detailed as to why you are offering tips on why you should follow the Paleo diet.

    You say you offer tips and pointers to eat healthy but you have not really said why we should follow this diet? Did you have success with it? Did you change your life? How did it help? Things like that. Since it’s a healthy lifestyle and you have claimed people have lost weight on it with minimal exercise. You may want to show some pictures of before and after. Everyone loves a good before and after when it comes to losing weight.

    You may also want to put a disclaimer that any diet changes should be consulted with a physician first. It’s always a good rule of thumb to CYA, especially in this day and age when people sue over anything.

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