Please Critique and Suggestions for My New Site

Its nice and clean. The theme design has quite a lot of lines, so maybe a more prominent or solid colour navigation menu might look better? I don’t know but maybe something to try. A nice logo for the title rather than the text would lift it also. Good job.

As mentioned above, the site is busy looking with all the lines.

A pet peeve of mine is poor grammar. You articles are very poorly written and hard to follow. You might want to use a word processor with a grammar checker to write your articles prior to posting them on your site.

Good luck,
Nick

i like the look of your site, its very clean, tidy, all that jazz. its definetly designed better than mine (not saying much there) i like the siimple white and blue, it makes your pics pop up very nice however i will agree that your articles need a bit of touching up, i’d go back and proofread them all, cause you might lose readers half way through a poorly written piece. besides that great job buddy.